0327写作01

1.The school has always been regarded as a place that can help young people to gain knowledge and improve abilities of employment.
2.As far as i can see,academic curriculum are important,but if students do not know how to discriminate between right and wrong,it will be difficult for them to achieve success.
3.Most teachers suppose that students should pay more attention to main curriculum,because these courses determine whether they can go to university.
4.Knowledge from these curriculum can lay a solid foundation for students’ college life,they can find better jobs.
5.For instance,if they can learn mathematics well,they may analyze some data effectively by building a model in university and become a financial analyst or a engineer.
6.If students should spend time on learning moral code and constraining behaviors,they may do not have enough time to focus on major subjects.
7.Schools can impart some important virtues to students to make them become a useful person by taking advantages of their knowledge.
8.If people understand being faithful,they will not sell any confidential information to competitors.
9.If a engineer have a sense of social responsibility,he or she will design products which can be used safely for consumers.
10.If students do not obey moral rules,it is not possible for them to achieve success even if they get excellent grades at school.
11.My personal viewpoint is that only if students could discriminate between right and wrong would they achieve success.
12.Students should understand respecting teachers and get along well with classmates at school.
13.Some children like eating fast-food,this will lead to obesity.
14.If they do not recognize these problems,the problems will have a adverse impact on their studies and future work.
 
 
 
 
1.Schools have always been regarded as the place for young people to gain knowledge and improve abilities of employment.
1.School are normally seen as the place where the next generation can increase knowledge and improve employ-ability.
 
2.As far as i can see,academic curriculum are important,but if students do not understand how to discriminate between right and wrong,they can hardly achieve success.
2.In my view,academic subjects are important to one’s career achievement,but students who do not know the difference between right and wrong cannot succeed in their working lives.
 
3.Most teachers suppose that students should pay more attention to major subjects because these curriculum determine whether they can go to university in the future.
3.Many teachers suggest that students should concentrate on core subjects,because the performance in these courses can determine whether they can enter university in the future.
 
4.Knowledge from these curriculum can lay a solid foundation for student’s college life,and find a better job.
4.What students can learn in academic courses can provide a firm grounding for university and help them find decent jobs.
 
5.For instance,if they can learn mathematics well at middle school,they may analyze some data efficiently by building a model and become a financial analyst or a engineer.
5.For example,students who acquire mathematical skills at school can build models to analyze data at university and work as financial analysts and engineers after they graduate.
 
6.If students should spend more time on moral code and restraining behaviors they may do not have enough time to concentrate on major subjects.
6.They are less likely to focus on key disciplines if they are required to spend time in studying moral principles and behavior norms.
 
7.Schools can impart some important virtues to students to make them to be useful persons by taking advantages of their knowledge.
7.Schools can impart some important virtues into students,which enable them to make good use of their knowledge to contribute positively to society.
 
8.If people understand being loyal,they will not sell any confidential information to competitors.
8.If one understand the value of loyalty,he or she will not sell confidential documents of his or her employer to other companies.
 
9.If a engineer have a sense of social responsibility,he or she will design products which can be used safely for consumers.
9.Engineers who are conscious of social responsibilities are more likely to design safe products which benefit consumers.
 
10.If students do not obey moral rules,it is not possible for them to achieve success even if they get excellent grades at school.
10.Students who do not have a moral compass cannot achieve success,even though they perform well at school.
 
11.My personal viewpoint is that only if students could discriminate between right and wrong would they achieve success.
11.In my opinion,students cannot be successful if they are not able to distinguish right from wrong.
 
12.Students should understand respecting their teachers and get along well with their classmates at school.
12.Students should learn how to respect teachers and get along well with classmates.
 
13.Some children may like eating fast-food,this could lead to obesity.
13.Some students like eating fast food,which can cau
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se obesity.
 
14.If they do not realize these problems,the problems will have a adverse impact on their study and their future work.
14.If they do not realize these problems,their education and career can be affected adversely.