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1. 第一段
Nevertheless, graph also shows that over time situation recovered again. Until May 2002, biodiversity spread out again. The number of different species in the soil increased to nearly 15000.
状语，谓语各司其位，别混在一起
Figure also shows that, in spite of the extensive loss of species, the number of species began to rise again and biodiversity began to return. Until May 2002, the number of different species in the soil had increased to nearly 15000.
2. 第二段
This examination clearly shows several points. Human behavior can do harm to biodiversity and strongly diminish the variety of species in a habitat. It also shows the facility of nature to recover, as the increase in the number of species shows. Nevertheless, we must not ignore that it takes a long time until the number of different species will be as high as before the deforestation. Consequently, we should try to avoid any harm to nature and to protect biodiversity as far as possible.
Several points, firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 这些语序词是对应的，要用就必须声明
用最肯定，最直接和最坚定的语气，就是要坚定！哪怕有错，也要坚定地把错误暴露给别人看！
This investigation clearly illustrates several points. First, human behavior can harm biodiversity and strongly diminish the variety of species in a habitat. Second, the increased in the number of species shows the ability of nature to recover. Nevertheless, we must realize that it will take a long time before the biodiversity will be as high as before the deforestation. Consequently, we should avoid harming nature and protect biodiversity.
参考文献
Tim Skern: 《Writing Scientific English: A Workbook》
Nevertheless, graph also shows that over time situation recovered again. Until May 2002, biodiversity spread out again. The number of different species in the soil increased to nearly 15000.
状语，谓语各司其位，别混在一起
Figure also shows that, in spite of the extensive loss of species, the number of species began to rise again and biodiversity began to return. Until May 2002, the number of different species in the soil had increased to nearly 15000.
2. 第二段
This examination clearly shows several points. Human behavior can do harm to biodiversity and strongly diminish the variety of species in a habitat. It also shows the facility of nature to recover, as the increase in the number of species shows. Nevertheless, we must not ignore that it takes a long time until the number of different species will be as high as before the deforestation. Consequently, we should try to avoid any harm to nature and to protect biodiversity as far as possible.
Several points, firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 这些语序词是对应的，要用就必须声明
用最肯定，最直接和最坚定的语气，就是要坚定！哪怕有错，也要坚定地把错误暴露给别人看！
This investigation clearly illustrates several points. First, human behavior can harm biodiversity and strongly diminish the variety of species in a habitat. Second, the increased in the number of species shows the ability of nature to recover. Nevertheless, we must realize that it will take a long time before the biodiversity will be as high as before the deforestation. Consequently, we should avoid harming nature and protect biodiversity.
参考文献
Tim Skern: 《Writing Scientific English: A Workbook》
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