科技英语/专业英语——改错总结【2】

1.固定句式

make it + adj + 句子

例：These features make the electronic systems difficult to intercept this kind of signal.

正确形式：These features make it  difficult for the electronic systems  to intercept
this kind of signal.

and then 搭配

例：Let P and Q be two Boolean algorithms(它是可数名词), then their combination is a new algorithm.

正确形式：Let P and Q be two Boolean algorithms(它是可数名词),
and then their combination is a new algorithm.

从事于 be engaged in 

例：The authors engages in the teaching and search of computer vision and image processing.

正确形式：The authors
is  engaged in the
teaching on(不同的介词搭配) and search of
computer vision and image processing.

2.固定搭配

例：Figure.7 draws the principle diagram of the transformation 

正确形式：Figure.7
shows the principle diagram of the transformation 

(画出了，固定搭配show)

例：The family of curves refers to a set of curves
正确形式：By family of curves is meant
a set of curves 
(指的是，通过,...表示By .... is meant)

例：On the basis of the above analysis to the decompositon , a novel kind of configuration is followed
正确形式：On the basis of the above analysis of
(介词of 固定搭配)the decompositon  , a novel kind of configuration
results.
(得到一种新的.......使用result)