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双重否定表肯定，被动表达：
This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of how elders are treated by their grownn-up children in some of the families in china.
 
 
This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon
/of how elders are treated by their grownn-up children
/in some of the families in china.
 
现象首句：
not-uncommon &commmon
老年人：the old;the eldersm,senior,
其他亮点:
主系表结构。
2.三大从句。
3形式主语
4.形式宾语
5.强调句子
6.被动
7.否定。
 
总体描述：
//首句
As is illustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/show in the picture.
//表述内容：
//描述性
//主语，多动作，空间位置，名称或位置 联系统一到另一个对象
Hoding a gun and hiding in the bush,a brid is starting at the sky where humanbeings are flying.
//对比性：
//字数句:
Simple as it is,the drawing renders us pondering awefully.
//提出总结观点：
Accordingly,What this far-reaching picture depicts  reflects a
common phenomenon in today’s society:
xxxx,ought to be weighed/conscientiously.
 
//第二段：
  why  do we lay emphasic on this server points?
 
//连接词：
for one thing ,… for another …
on the one hand,on the other hand;
 
For on thing,//万能原因句子：
No better illustrtionn of this  idea touched on above can be
maintained/taken/weighed than the case as listed below.
 
xxxx
consequently,According/on balance/therefore/it follows that,
no issue in china is as basic to build.